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I would love it if you took a few minutes to write a detailed and critical analysis of this piece of writing. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing skills, and this would be a great help to me! There's no need for you to write an essay (thought that would be nice), you can just give me a brief list about things I should work on. Thanks!
The nostalgia! I can see your memories. You did a great job with creating realistic pictures that are easy to see. So, I guess the imagery is what I most admire about this. :) It helps me to be apart of the story in a way that makes it seem as if it's about me.
Not at all! Your ending took care of any questions that I had at the end. I'm not saying that your ending was uninteresting, because it was quite the opposite! And it was very true as well. :) I've realized that when you go somewhere, and even if you're just gone for a short time then come back, you expect everything to be the same. When really it almost never is.
Very well done! It was easy to picture, and I can see nothing that needs improvement. :) Just keep writing!