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September 27, 2017

PROMPT: Omniscient Lens

She is Fate. 
She rings the doorbell four times. Always four.
Then she waits.
She stands there, thinking about old things and new things. 
And Luke answers the door, just like always, hate and pain sharp in his chest. 
"What do you want?" he asks, even though he knows. She knows he knows. 
"Money," she says.
Luke takes out a dollar bill and hands it to her.
"Money," she repeats. 
He hands her two more. 
Then she shuts the door and leaves. Luke is alone again. 
And Fate walks to the corner store and buys a pack of gummy worms. 


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  • Pandy99

    Thanks :) I don't know what I was thinking, really :)

    over 3 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    . . .
    . . . ?
    ...Uh, gummy worms?

    (Well written, by the way.)

    over 3 years ago