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I am looking for positive critique on this piece, as well as help with rhymes... Thanks!
'In the eye of a hurricane' - It caught my attention and pulled me in to the rest of the poem. The last line is also good!
Comfort, peace. It is said that in the eye of the hurricane is complete calm, while you see the storm rage around you. The last verse of this portrayed a community brought together by the hurricane, which is a wonderful picture! Everyone here has the same current problem, and can relate to each other. When you understand the situation, it's easier to help.
You're talking about the hurricanes in (I'm really bad with geography names and directions :P) the Americas? This is the first piece that I've seen on here about the Hurricanes, and you did a great job in putting yourself in the place of the victims.
With this piece, you helped me to be awed at the nature which God has made. You did a fabulous job on this, and while I didn't notice the rhymes all that much, (and you really don't need them to rhyme) the words that you choose fit really well!
Keep up the fantastic work!