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I feel like the dialogue at the end is odd, please let me know anything else you notice!!
"Three months ago, Cullen had Joshua." It sums up the whole piece very well and adds a melancholy tone.
Sad and empty, and kind of angry that they didn't get to be happy.
Were Cullen and Joshua in a romantic relationship?
It's sweet and sad. Really good.