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'Friedrich began to cry.' - Wow, wow, wow. I'm tempted to cry myself. After all that he and his friend went through, the war is finally over. I can only get a taste of the emotions he's feeling. What a solemn, yet joyful moment.
Wow! That's what I thought after finishing. I put myself into the place of Friedrich, but the only way that I could do that was because you wrote this with so much description. I couldn't stop reading it as soon as I began. :)
Do you like writing historical fiction? I assume that you must since you did an incredible job with this piece. :) Is this based off of a specific war? Yes, I know that was more than one question. ;)
Incredible! There are a few grammatical issues, but that doesn't take away from the realistic descriptions and emotions that you portrayed through your writing.
Keep up this awesome work, and God bless!
BTW, I like the faith bit that you put into here. :) Tells me a little bit about Friedrich's background.