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Oh my goodness! You are so talented, first of all, its hard to pick one. Josef's eyes were glazed open and unmoving; his face frozen in a happy grin I guess this one because it showed Josef died happy. Even in the midst of all this war he was still happy. and then I really like where they talk and how you described it.
Sad! I recently read a Holocaust book and it roe me up and now this from the other side, people fighting... I know its Germans which makes it even more intriguing. I'd like to believe they diodn;t know what was going on,. If they did I don't think I could look at them the same.
I'm just... blown away
I wish it was on the Allies side in fact I thought it was until I looked back. I guess what to take away is not every soldier on whatever side is good or bad. I like to believe they didn't know what was happening to the Jews at that time.