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It pulls me into the story as the character. I can feel the wind, the sunshine, and smile when the character smiles.
What were the good memories? I like the hint of them that you have here, though. :) I like how you touched on safety at the end. Safety is sometimes hard to find, but feeling it is a smile and a joy all wrapped up together. :D I know that I am always safe in God's arms.
I especially appreciate this piece because it's getting cold here where I live. ;) Just a thought, but you may want to add a short line from the sense of smell. Maybe about apples, (since it's Autumn), or perhaps something baking? But I think since you have this piece out in nature, something that grows outside would be best. ;)
Anyways, do what you like. Great job with this!