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Doubt

By: Lee Fudge


FREE WRITING

Fudge, Fudge, what's your cause?

Don't have to you say, you just want to write?

"You'll have to get a real job," They'll say.

What is writing to you?

What has it done for you?

This is how I feel sometimes.

Message to Readers

Any feedback is great.


Peer Review

The highlighted line. Because it really makes you "Well, what has writing done for me?" It makes you reflect on how writing has changed you're life and molded you into the person you are today.


I relate with this piece. Parents want the best for their children of course. But some just have trouble seeing the light at the end of the tunnel. I want to be a writer as well but I know how challenging it is these days.


How do you think writing has shaped you as a person?


Reviewer Comments

I know the feeling, trust me
You aren't alone, compadre