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'The visitor's smile lit up her heart and suddenly she was alright.' - You never know what your kindness can do for someone. :) You showed this in the last line. A simple friendly smile can brighten up someone's day. :)
Never! You did a good job in sticking with the main character's thoughts and feelings. I love the contrast of loneliness in the beginning, to joy in the end. :)
Great job! A lot of stories end sad (like most of mine) but happy endings are what make the world go round. ;) Love how you wrote this! And your descriptions were great!