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First of all, does the whole passage count? Because I loved it! I did really enjoy when Jesse says that she fell in a "rather annoyingly" manner. I like this character!
I am feeling a little sad...Because it ended! But seriously, I felt very emotionally vulnerable. I can see myself being sad after this story ends, which makes me want more!
Please tell me you're planning on making this a flat out novel, or maybe series of books, because I loved it and would love to read more! (yes I do know there are like 6 chapters to this already, but I'm a little late since I just started)
Fantastic job! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)