Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
Message to Readers
Please let me know how you feel afterwards and summarize my poem in one sentence so that I can see where to work on getting my message across more clearly. I hope you can relate (or rather, for your sake, that you can't). What do you think of the word I coined?
The Lines I highlighted were amazing and so real/deep
I feel strong (Like I can beat reality's expectations)
What or who inspired you to write this? (That's super personal so you don't have to answer if you don't want to)
Your writing is amazing! I am also a Christian and I would love if you peer reviewed some of my work