Riverise

I discovered it several years ago when my sister and I were lost in the woods around our lake: a small stream running through the woods in an area that, now that i think back on it, was probably in my neighbor's yard. It was small and sandy, filled with small pebbles, dirt, and leaves. I decided to stake my claim on it and call it Riverise, based on a heavenly location in one of my favorite book series because it was a pristine body of water.

Message to Readers

I would like subjective and grammatical feedback.

Peer Review

What do you appreciate or admire about this name?

It's a combination of "river" and "paradise", right? It gives me a beautiful image. :)

Do you have any questions for the writer about this new name, or his/her relationship to the place?

Is this a true story? I like how you began this composition. :)

Reviewer Comments

Great job! I love the nostalgic feeling I get while reading this!
Keep up the good work!
God bless!