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Message to Readers
I would like subjective and grammatical feedback.
Peer Review
It's a combination of "river" and "paradise", right? It gives me a beautiful image. :)
Is this a true story? I like how you began this composition. :)
Reviewer Comments
Great job! I love the nostalgic feeling I get while reading this!
Keep up the good work!
God bless!