Emmy R

United States

High school senior who is passionate about writing

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I would like subjective and grammatical feedback.

Riverise

September 6, 2017

I discovered it several years ago when my sister and I were lost in the woods around our lake: a small stream running through the woods in an area that, now that i think back on it, was probably in my neighbor's yard. It was small and sandy, filled with small pebbles, dirt, and leaves.  I decided to stake my claim on it and call it Riverise, based on a heavenly location in one of my favorite book series because it was a pristine body of water. 

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