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This is a little bit longer, I just realized that the low end of the word goal was about 4 hundred more words that I had, so I reduced the difference to 3 hundred words. Sorry for overloading you with this piece.
The quote. It was very interesting, and I wanted to see how you tied it into your piece.
Maybe you could include who G.K Chesterton was? Or why you chose that quote?
I don't think so.
It's very good, and it did not seem long at all. I wasn't overloaded in the least. If anything, it was a little shorter than I expected, but maybe that's because I expected it to be very long.
Overall this piece was very good, you just need to tie in the quote a little better.