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Lee Fudge

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Do You Wish to Die?

September 4, 2017

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Do you wish to die?

You will if you go back again.

Seeing what has changed, seeing how your  haunts have been destroyed. 

Do you wish to die?

You will if you see how the people changed, new fashions, new traits, new friends.

Do you wish to die?

You will if you see some kids, not knowing what it was like before you left, thinking it has always been this way.

Do you wish to die?

You may not die literally, but you'll die a little inside.
This is a little different for me, I like to write things with a direct meaning. While this can interpreted in some ways. Write what you think it means in the comments.

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3 Comments
  • .audrey michelle.

    This piece isn't directed to physical pain or death, rather it is directed to mental pain or death. I absolutely loved this piece and the power you wrote in it. It would make someone claw deep into their minds and ponder on this piece. I loved it!

    I think that this piece means being lost. In any way, shape, or form, this piece is directed to the lost people, maybe lost physically, but more on the mental side.

    I really liked this piece! Keep writing!


    over 1 year ago
  • Lee Fudge

    I did yes, but other interpretations are welcome.


    almost 2 years ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    If you leave your homeland and come back after a while. That's how I interpret it. Is that how you wrote it?


    almost 2 years ago