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'Yes. He is – at last! - at peace.' - Such a powerful ending! It makes me want to ask: How do I get that peace? Except that I already know. :) Very well-done in causing your readers to want what this man has.
Renewed in my faith! Like the man at the end. :) You described everything with incredible detail, completely drawing me in. I love the steadfast immovable spirit that you give the main character.
What place did you mean for the setting? It's okay if you didn't really mean a specific place. Even without mentioning where he was, you described the scene well, so that I was never lost.
You did an absolute fabulous job with the descriptions! The main character is like a soldier of God. :) Helping those in the body of Christ, and praying for them. You showed me what a true disciple of Jesus would be like. :)
Thank you so much for writing this!
Keep it up!