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boog0518@yahoo.com

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This was a lot harder then I thought it would be and had to keep cutting down my word count while still trying to keep some of the eerie feeling within it.

Trapped

August 23, 2017

PROMPT: Writing Small

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    Darkness engulfed us down to the last atom and if there was any left over space, sobs filled it. From the corner a cry broke out followed by the occasional hiccup, "hic...hic......hic...".  Footsteps, a flash of light gone as soon as it came, the flick of a match. "Get up".
This was harder than I thought it would be, originally I wrote 20 extra words and had to continuously cut it down while trying to keep the eerie feeling. 

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  • AbigailSauble

    This is a very mysterious piece. :) Are they being kidnapped? Slaves, perhaps?
    I love this! Great job!
    God bless!


    about 2 years ago