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October 13, 2017

Underwater. Whether it be the ocean or a pool to me the feel of the cold, refreshing water touching my skin is the greatest feeling I have ever felt. The loud sounds of the people above the water and as soon as I go under the surface I am surrounded by the silence of the water. This serenity washes all my problems away with the soothing currents. All my nerves can finally relax. Then, in a pool when I open my eyes the soft, fuzzy blue color that surrounds me makes me feel serene and calm. I don't know any other feeling that makes me feel better. There is no other place where I feel welcome and finally serene. 

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  • AbigailSauble

    Neat feelings that you bring out in this piece! Almost made me like water. :P
    Keep writing!
    God bless!

    almost 3 years ago