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Please tell me what you think. I would like to get better at writing. Thank you!
The description that is relatable to almost all readers (the serenity of water)
This is only my opinion, but to enhance the sense of serene and calmness I'd add more commas to drag out the sentences, gave some examples above. I'm not sure about you but I personally would also describe how the water runs through your fingers when you drag it along the surface, since in my opinion, the best sense you describe is touch. Please know that this only my opinion and your work so far is brilliant!! Keep it up~~~