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Message to Readers
the people who are fed up with head lice.
The last line stands out to me the most because of the language choice, when you read it out loud, it flows the most.
A sense of fulfilment because the individual has finally gotten rid of head lice.
How did you come up with the title name?
This feels like one of the poems I've read before called Rape of the Lock where the author detailed every little thing and compared it using a lot of literary techniques. I think you've done the same here in a very interesting way.