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Let me know if there's anything you would change or any feedback you would give!
Starting with something relatable is a great way to grab interest - New Year's resolutions are something that nearly everyone has had or has struggled with, so the reader can relate to what you've written, and is interested in reading more.
The ending is amazing - I can tell right away that it's your friend at the door, even though you don't say it outright!
Nowhere was I confused, however if you were looking to add a little something you could hint more at the consequences of last year's drama - it might add some more suspense to the ending.
Good structure, interesting story line - all this needs is a bit of tidying up! Good work:)
Keep an eye on tense - you flip back and forth between past and present a few times - it would help with flow and clarity if you stuck with just one throughout.