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Message to Readers

This was inspired by the HUGE storm we had last night in KCK, right after the eclipse! Thanks for reading, and hope you like it!


August 22, 2017

PROMPT: Slow Seeing

Clouds gather as if for a meeting,
and the air begins to chill and darken.

Drops begin to fall like tears from the heavens,
eventually escalating to an ocean 
as if the bottom fell out of the Atlantic.

Winds rush, branches bend, lights go out, 
as the world takes in the awesome sight 
of the waters rising.

As the winds and the heavens rest,
the ocean calms, and the clouds begin to fade,
the sun returns, and all is calm.

The world, sprinkled with dew, sparkles as 
sunlight dances on leaves and jewels of water 
shimmer as a diamond does.


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1 Comment
  • Luna Lemon

    Wow! Your imagery is incredible! I love the words you incorporated in this piece such as chill, tears, heavens, escalating, dew, and diamonds. This creates a great tone and gives rich imagery to the reader! This was sooo well done and I loved everything about it. Great job:)

    about 2 years ago