Peer Review by Amyy (Australia)

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Words

By: Georgia Cleaver


FREE WRITING

Falling off the page
I can't stop watching the way
They curl around your mouth

You couldn't possibly understand 
How beautiful words can be
When you say them

 


Peer Review

Falling off the page. It sounds satisfying and metaphorically aesthetic.


A sense of fulfilment but also a need for more.


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Reviewer Comments

You don't even describe someone, but it just makes me thing of this movie I watched where this guy is just watching a girl read a book and he can't help but smile.