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The title "Needle and Thread" is eye-catching. It gives off a sense of familiarity and intrigue.
In the end of the story, it leaves a sense of wonder that is a great way to conclude the piece since the tailor is a mysterious character.
I believe that the tailor's personality was a little absent but it was very entertaining.
Just keep on writing. You are obviously great at it!
I would say to be more specific since the text was a little vague. However, the interest took the piece to a whole new level!