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he didn't

By: leadinghomeward

PROMPT: Six-Word Story

I felt too much.

He didn't.

Message to Readers

Looking for helpful criticism :) Thanks for reading!

Peer Review

I'm guessing the narrator and the boy were in a relationship, with the latter being more emotional while the former is distant. They no longer are together.

It's a break-up piece.

Reviewer Comments

Nice job!