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I was interested in the way the story was written and when I saw the first sentence and wanted to read more to see how the writing progressed.
I think the whole story very beautifully utilizes the power of suggestion as the character is basically telling her own death story.
No, I think you open it very poetically and by the end, you have wrapped everything up and left just enough unsaid.
This is a very well written story that was very fun to read and the way you typed it using the different fonts made it very fun to read out loud as well. Awesome job!!