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Sixteen

By: Mina Lee


PROMPT: Six-Word Story

She would have turned sixteen today.


Peer Review

A girl died at a relatively young age. Someone who was presumably close to her is mourning the loss on her birthday.


It's a nice twist on Ernest Hemingway's six sentence story that is effective at producing a similar sense of loss and sorrow in the reader.


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