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The last line stands out most to be because people don't always want to reflect on the past, especially if it's painful or unpleasant.
I was unsure how to feel after I read this poem. The poem made me think about my past and my own actions.
I would ask the author the about the white paint because I am not sure what it is suppose to represent. Does the paint represent innocence and goodness being removed to show the pain underneath?
I think this is a great poem. You used repetition, imagery, and metaphors very well. I suggest trying a rhyme scheme, similes, or alliteration.