Over the past year, I defeated a fear of other people, learned the value of clarity and brevity, fought writer's block, and developed pride in my words.
Now I am a writer with a love for onomatopoeias and an affinity for semicolons.
Any idea on how to strengthen the character? I added a few things, but I don't know if it's quite there yet.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
Written By: ollieollie
August 18, 2017