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Message to Readers
I am deeply sorry if I offended you with my portrayal of anorexia, especially if you are suffering/have suffered from it. If my work seems highly attacking or offensive, please inform me and I will change it.
The constant skewed belief that I got in previewing this work drew me in and held me. The relateable self-doubt throughout is something that made me need to print and frame this piece.
This piece, in and of itself, planted ideas and questions in my head with hefty metaphors and figurative language
No. The vague mystery added to the mood, so all in all, it was easy to follow and left some good questions.
Keep writing dude! this was really good! I'd love to read more like this!