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The mood, definitely! A melancholy sort of mood, I suppose. Sad, with a touch of nostalgia. Great job in hinting at the main character's past. How far into the future did you plan this story to be set to?
I think you gave me enough information so that I can feel this person's sadness. He thought he could start over in Washington D.C., but he realized that he couldn't. It'd be nice to know what exactly happened to cause all of the feelings that he's experiencing, but I love this piece that way it is. :)
Excellent job with the over-all mood of the piece! You did a fantastic job with the descriptions, and nostalgia part of this!
Great job! Keep it up!