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This is about being a light for Jesus. Being a Christian, it's my "job" in life. :) I'm Christ's ambassador. When I read this piece, I'm reminded of a favorite childhood song. :) "This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine . . . . "
How you wished to set the world afire, I suppose. :) I like this story shorter, so I wouldn't change anything. :) You did a good job of going from describing the match and what it is, to what you were going to do with it. (i.e., set the world afire).
Great job! This is a conviction to me to be more open with my faith. :) Thank you so much for writing this, and for your Christ-like example!
Have a fabulous day!