Peer Review by AbigailSauble (United States)

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Matchstick

By: Lone Warrior WWII


PROMPT: Writing Small

A matchstick, tiny, small, seemingly meaningless. Yet in the darkest of nights it will shine bright. It will be a beacon of hope. It's tiny light will grow as it sets the world on fire. I wish to be that matchstick. To set the world afire with change.


Peer Review

This is about being a light for Jesus. Being a Christian, it's my "job" in life. :) I'm Christ's ambassador. When I read this piece, I'm reminded of a favorite childhood song. :) "This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine . . . . "


How you wished to set the world afire, I suppose. :) I like this story shorter, so I wouldn't change anything. :) You did a good job of going from describing the match and what it is, to what you were going to do with it. (i.e., set the world afire).


Reviewer Comments

Great job! This is a conviction to me to be more open with my faith. :) Thank you so much for writing this, and for your Christ-like example!
Have a fabulous day!
God bless!