Peer Review by my life is a lyrical (Philippines)

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Matchstick

By: Lone Warrior WWII


PROMPT: Writing Small

A matchstick, tiny, small, seemingly meaningless. Yet in the darkest of nights it will shine bright. It will be a beacon of hope. It's tiny light will grow as it sets the world on fire. I wish to be that matchstick. To set the world afire with change.


Peer Review

The short yet fulfilling style was the creme de la creme of the story.


I would like to know more of the character development of the third person point of view.


Reviewer Comments

Good Effort!