Peer Review by E.s.L_:) (Canada)

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By: Lone Warrior WWII

PROMPT: Writing Small

A matchstick, tiny, small, seemingly meaningless. Yet in the darkest of nights it will shine bright. It will be a beacon of hope. It's tiny light will grow as it sets the world on fire. I wish to be that matchstick. To set the world afire with change.

Peer Review

I appreciate this because it tells me that something small like one kid can make a change.

I would like to hear about it starting as a match, then a lamp, then a fire, and then a big bonfire.

Reviewer Comments

This is a great paragraph it may be a small paragraph but it has a big meaning.