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Oh god, which one? Probably 'She is a mess of so much to say and a lack of skills to do so. ' Sometimes your thoughts just build up and you have no idea how to get them out and so they just explode onto your keyboard. I think that's what happened here, and it's amazing. That line pretty much sums that whole feeling up.
I'M NOT ALONE! was the first thought. I was left with a feeling of rawness and truth that I rarely get from other writing. This was not pretty. It was sloppy and real and uncaring of criticism and it was beautiful. I wish I had this much confidence.
How did it feel when you just let your fingers run? I can sense the relief coming from this piece, and I would like to know how much thought you put into this. Because it seems like you just wrote whatever first came into your mind, but in the best way possible.
Grace. Oh, Grace. This. Is. Incredible. Its imperfection is what makes is special, and it was a joy to read. I have no criticism because it is exactly what it needs to be. This brought me back to the roots of what writing is for. Not to look pretty, but as an outlet for these crazy brains of ours. The closest comparison I can make to this would be abstract art.
Bravo, my friend.