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How uplifting it is. I smiled and felt good about myself when I read this piece, not something that always happens when I read.
I really don't have much to say. You wrote in an honest and personable tone that filled me with good feelings and happiness. You realized that going into the abstract was hard, and decided to pick out one idea and make it concrete. I hope you continue to write more pieces like this, which will make everyone who chances to read them look introspectively and see the good in themselves. Great work!