Crys Partridge

United States

I've lived in three countries so far and hope to further travel the world in order to gain the depth I need for the stories I really want to write someday - the stories I'm practicing for now.

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Killing Captain Hook

August 23, 2015

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I dreamed that I was Peter Pan
And fighting Hook without a plan
To take a break and stop and rest,
But fighting, ceaselessly, my best;
Although exhausted, I fought on
Untill the truth began to dawn
On me - that Captain Hook - he lived
For one sole thing: to see me dead!
The plot hole was, without me, he
Was left without a thing to be.
No Peter Pan, no Captain Hook.
I took a breath and paused to look
Into his eyes before I stabbed
My dagger in my chest. He had
The strangest look. We both collapsed.
I died proud and victorious.
Yes, this is an actual dream I had, so there's no deep meaning, just flawed dream logic.


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