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Any kinds of feedback is very welcome, every thing helps.
"As if no word in the English Language could ever come close To describing the beauty of the sunset. And the way her eyes gleamed, " I love how you made the transition from a landscape to a person, the center of this poem.
It is a feeling of soft sadness and sentimentality because someone was lost in this poem and someone moved on. It is described quite well.
Did you also write the poem "Writing Him"? If so, it could be cool to connect these pieces even more!
Awesome job with this piece! I love the way you switch between describing the ocean and "Her." If possible, I would go into a little more detail about her, more descriptions, and her actions/personality traits, just to give more visual to the poem. Great job!