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BlueWriter

United States

Lil K
Bree Bree
Emilie
I am transgender
I am bisexual
I love to write
I am 13
I am in eighth grade
I have two dogs
I love all animals
I love my family and friends
I want to join the national guard
LOKI
Depressed

Message to Readers

Thought for this poem inspired by the world around us, and what troubles some of us have to go through.

My Hope

July 20, 2017

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   Gasping for air.
I cling, I cling
to whatever is left.
​To anything.

​Walls closing in.
​Room spins, Room spins.
Getting so dizzy,
​this ride needs to end.

Fist Hammers down.
​The pain, The pain.
​Sunshine is gone
​There is only hard rain.
 
Fall to my knees.
​I cave, I cave.
​Tide swept me up,
​now I'm lost in the waves.       

​To tired to fight.
Cant cope, Cant cope.
​No way to regain
my repossessed hope.
 

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6 Comments
  • BlueWriter

    There is always god given hope!!!


    8 months ago
  • BlueWriter

    Thanks


    about 1 year ago
  • -Foxmillionaire-

    Great pattern, I love all your work. God bless


    about 1 year ago
  • Kaitlyn ❄

    I love this so much. Amazing rhymes and great everything, bluewriter!


    about 1 year ago
  • BlueWriter

    god bless is correct! There is always God-given hope. Also, pls keep writing also!! :D Thanks a ton


    about 1 year ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Great job with the rhymes! Thankfully, there is hope! :D God-given hope!
    Have a great day! Keep writing!
    God bless!


    about 1 year ago