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I think it has to be the visual. There is plenty of easy imagery, like a giant ball under your bed, raindrops ricocheting, grey sky tossed over like a tablecloth, it was very different and very striking and yet conjured up a clear image in my mind!
Most of the comparisons that the writer has made are relatable, but rarely noticed. I feel as if I can see the perspective, see the grey, uniform sky, the ricocheting drops, the smell of mildew. It certainly transports me a rainy day.
This piece is really nostalgic and imaginative and interesting! The writer has compared a rainy day to the smells and sights of his memories, which is amazing to read! I love that your descriptions are so unique, I don't think I would have read another piece like this.