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The ending. I like how you admit that you don't need to understand the subject right this moment.
You don't always have to know everything. There's a time and a place for everything, so enjoy what you have at the moment.
It's okay to be dependent: enjoy being a kid or you adult (whichever term you prefer) while you can.
I like the insights you provide. One small thing though: the very beginning of the piece is set up like a poem, but then you start using paragraphs. You probably want to have the first few lines combined into one paragraph so that they fit better with the overall style of the piece. Besides that, I think you did a spectacular job with the prompt.