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Open to interpretation for everything from choice of words to the overall mood. Any feedback is welcomed
Sporadic, as it follows the lust of a teenage boy.
Personification and metaphor.
The very first line addressing the nurse. Just from reading that line I knew how funny the rest of the poem was going to be. It sets the tone for a lustful, hilarious poem filled with nurse references and love.
I'm left with laughter and good vibes. This poem made me smile and think about the song "Stacy's Mom", another unforgettable ballad from a boy to an older woman.
This is maybe the funniest poem I've ever read. With your rhyme scheme, nurse and love references, and letter format, you construct a playful yet artful piece of work. Great job!