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"She was not one to always barge into conversations with the correct facts about anything, but she naturally would reveal her knowledge in time, like a crystal fuchsia rose blossoming in the sweetest of springs that the world ever brought about."
That metaphor you used is so incredibly beautiful. <3
The protagonist describes a better time: what them and their friends were all likes in the past, and shows how the protagonist feels about all of them now.
Your extensive vocabulary is incredible, as always (although, maybe vary it in some places I pointed out).
This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!