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This is an interesting piece I want your thoughts on what you honestly think
'You saw what everyone else saw, a happy girl with a pretty face. My heart meant nothing.' - Because it's true. People look at everyone else these days, but don't look at their heart. Don't look 'behind the mask'. This is also a sad line because most people don't really care what you're going through. Humans will fail, will not see what the other is going through, but God does. :)
Sadness, and also resolute in that I will strive to be better at looking at the heart rather than the face. Looks can be deceiving.
Are these your personal feelings? You don't have to answer if you don't want to. :) Here's another question if you'd like. ;) What was your inspiration? Did you have someone in mind when you wrote this?
Well done! You captured outside beauty as opposed to inward beauty very well!
Keep up the good work!