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This is an interesting piece I want your thoughts on what you honestly think
"When you looked at me you didn't simply see me. You saw what everyone else saw, a happy girl with a pretty face." This is so amazing! I think if I had to pick a line I would pick this one even though it's more than one sentence.
Surprisingly, hope and sadness in a blender. Hope that someone will finally look beyond the mask. Are you popular? Not that it matters that much, but every time I see those people they seem so fake to me, so unreal. I'd like to know them and not the school them if you get what I'm saying.
It's not really a question but please throw the mask away. You don't needs it.
This is a great piece and I hope people start looking beyond the mask.