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This song is about theater life and pondering the meaning/why/what happens after it's all done.
"But what happens when the/ Curtains close?" Such a sweet, profound question!
I love it just the way it is—it's a perfect song, and I could even see it in a play— I LOVE it!!!
Keep writing! This is beautiful!!!
This is beautiful! Major kudos with the way you wrote it that it really could fit perfectly in a great play(one that I'd definitely go see!) Keep it up! You're amazing!