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I really liked how it wasn't in stanzas like most poems. It was unique and beautiful!
Explanation of everything you wrote: it was all so beautiful
"words are nothing more than letters, tears nothing more than broken hope and yet staring out the window of orbs coated in a moss of denial I find myself wishing and hoping for the other toppled homes to be healed and restored to a childlike gaze of wisdom, it never surfaced that I was killing myself by saving the masses and that sometimes the sacrifice wasn't worth the toll."
A confused, yet understood flurry of emotions I cannot name.
I absolutely love this!