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The final line about the Beast being her favourite prince felt like a clever way to finish the story.
The curious names of the characters and the strange idea of Prince 'selecting' the main character make the piece rather intriguing.
Would you consider rewriting the chapter one day, to polish it and make it a smoother read?
I'm interested to see how the chapter is followed up ^w^ Good work writing this. Your chapter does need proofreading though, as it has several grammatical errors.