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Message to Readers
I always appreciate comments, likes, and peer reviews, because it tells me not only what you think and that you enjoy my work, but also hat it is simply being read, which makes me feel special.
"I gripped my legs tight as tears streamed down my face.' - I'm not exactly sure why, but you did an excellent job in expressing her feelings without really expressing her feelings. ;)
Intrigue. This isn't fantasy, is it?
Will you continue with this story?
Well done! You added just a bit of mystery to make it intriguing! Many unanswered questions! I hope you continue with this story! Keep up the good work! God bless!