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Message to Readers
I always appreciate comments, likes, and peer reviews, because it tells me not only what you think and that you enjoy my work, but also hat it is simply being read, which makes me feel special.
I love the irony of the ending Christin! At first, I thought it was just a scary story (this is not a situation I would ever want to be in), but it is a children's story as the prompt asked!
I feel that this is just a great piece.
What inspired this writing? Also, does it end up being from the point of view of a toy, or what? I'm a little confused when it comes to that aspect.
This is a great story. It is just bursting with details, your characters are grounded in the scene, the plot is amazing, and I just love it! It seemed as if there were a few grammatical errors i.e.: did it not let you tab? The formatting is off. And also, when someone is thinking something ("He What???"), it is usually put in italics instead of quotation marks.
Overall, this is sooo cool!!